I haven't played it yet, but I want to tell you to completely ignore anyone having issues with English being a second language. They wouldn't be able to play at all if you wrote it in your first language. I wouldn't be able to play it at all either.
I appreciate all the extra work it must take to create something like this, and that you are doing us a giant favor by including us in it AT ALL!!!
Is english not your first language or something? I am just noticing a lots of grammer issues and I'm not trying to be rude or mean, This looks like a great game but the writing could maybe be improved on I have trouble following what is going on sometimes because of the awkward dialog. I really do like the game though
You need to disassociate story routes from relationships. If you're going to have a lot of love interests, you'll be creating a rabbit hole of dev time for yourself trying to create an entire route for each one. This is one of the cases where going sandbox will actually speed up development.
Example: Have Alex meet the male neighbor Day 1, help with boxes, then go home to find sister bought the girly outfits, then Day 2 he meets the female neighbor in the car, if the MC takes the bus he meets her on the street anyway, and the MC is invited to the party later on. Similarly, the Alley event happens whenever you manually choose the Alley.
What happens is that different dialogue and events changes when characters are first met. For instance, if the MC takes the bus he won't know the neighbors are siblings until the party.
But you end up saving dev time in the long run by using the party to establish the full cast.
it wont let me work on day 10 at the cafe because i need to wear the cloths but when i go home to change it, it wont let me leave because im force to wear the dress to leave?
Having the same issue. Kinda an important bit for the dev to respond to. That event is at least skippable but once you get to day 12 you cant change your clothes to go do the interview again
I am not sure about this, but I'm not selling the game. At least, that's what my real intention is. It's completely free to play. Anyone can play this game. You do not have to pay and head to my Patreon page, really. I'm more than happy if you have played the game, despite every bad thing or joke in it. Thehe! Sorry, I just got carried away. To answer your question, they both are different.
how to remove the anal plug? I was masturbating in the room and the system offered to insert it, but I don't understand how to take it out again. At the same time, he refuses to leave the house with her
no. But I restarted again and went through a new one. When you buy an anal plug in a store, there is an option to put it on during masturbation, but then you can't take it out...
hi, I'm playing the public version of this game and I'm confused about some things.
I am aware that the game is still in an early stage of development. Despite reading the walkthrough, readme and changelog, I still haven't been able to find out how I can develop the necessary skills to work in the boutique, make-up shop or studio.
I also have no idea where I can get the necessary transition skills to enter the tattoo studio or have operations performed in the hospital.
I am also not able to purchase sex toys, although unlocked by the event in the MC's living room.
I'm sorry, I have not made a complete game walkthrough. It might be difficult for a new player, but I think if you're following the main quest will finish the game without problems.
So here's how to unlock skills:
(NOTE: Those Sub and Dom Skills aren't available for the public version.)
After you have clicked corruption button, it will bring you to this screen.
The playable skills for this current version are Transitions, Scheming, and Thievery. So you do not have to unlock the others.
You will be able to purchase the toys the next day after the event in the MC's living room.
No problem :) The previous version actually looks like what you mentioned. The button is visually highlighted and hovered. I'm still experimenting with everything inside the game, by the way.
Hi, I've tried all the routes, but I can't find the option to advertise sex toys on any of them. Only condoms, lubricant and the Sissy DVD (after activation) are available for purchase.
In addition, the game does not reveal to me how the skills communication, teamwork, administrative, problem solving, nursing and healthcare should be leveled.
It is beyond me how the sums of money of over 88000 that can be seen in the screenshots on this page here can be achieved.
In my opinion, the game is not self-explanatory enough in its current form.
How many days (in terms of story) is the finished game actually designed for?
So far I have never managed to get 14 corruprion points for masterplan.
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Does this project actually have an associated discord server? Nothing is listed on Patreon and the link provided here goes nowhere.
The playable toys for the current version are a dildo, buttplug, lubricant, and Sissy's DVD.
I haven't added the ability to gain these skills yet: communication, teamwork, administrative, problem solving, nursing, and healthcare.
As I have mentioned, I'm still experimenting with everything inside the game. This game still needs a lot of improvement. I have updated the game twice so far. I'm not working on this project full-time, there are still lots of things to add and work to be done.
I used the screenshot from playing version B.
It depends on the chosen path, 14/15 days in the game.
Yes, my project has a discord server. I can invite you to my channel. You can add me: testingmood#3494.
I love your game, I hope I can support you on Patreon as soon as I get a job hahaha, I think you could publish your game for android too, so more people would try it, i think Ren'py has a way to export it in apk.
If you ever wanted to translate the game into Spanish, I could also help you.
Thanks for the feedback. Yes, Renpy can do that, but I'm not confident enough to make the phone version. This game still needs a lot of improvement. I appreciate your help, but I don't think translating into other languages is a good idea since I have to change and fix the grammar over time. So, yeah, don't waste your time translating this game. Theheh. Here's my discord: testingmood#3494.
I think it's to do with permission. If you're using a guest account which would prevent Renpy from saving there or something that doesn't have "write permission" to wherever the save directory is located.
On Windows, your Ren'py save files can be found in the following folder:
%APPDATA%/RenPy/game_directory
Please, check the permissions for the Renpy folder and the folder above it to make sure there is both read and write access for it. And make sure your antivirus isn't blocking Renpy from reading and writing. Have you tried changing the windows user or running the game.exe as admin?
Believe I have discovered a bug it won’t let me go back home after changing my work outfit. Just keeps telling me to go to the mall and I just run through the scene with worker over and over.
Hi, thanks for mentioning the bug. I was unintentionally replacing a single block of code when I fixed the dialogue. You can re-download the file if you want, just load your progress at the start of day 4. It should've run without problems now. I've just fixed it.
it may seems that im stuck on day 2, I followed the walkthrough and idk what i missed. deffinetly get that work dress and *you know what* but idk what else, help anyone?
Could you tell me more? Did you get stuck where the MC couldn't go to sleep? If you got that stuck, the MC has to go to the city only once per day until the day of 5. On day 6, the MC can visit the City freely. That is Melathrion City's rule :(
So, on day 2... The MC goes to the office then goes to the museum/library. I'd recommend you see the readme inside the game folder. There is a walkthrough there.
Mm. After doing the first shopping stuff, the game is telling me I need to go to the therapist, but whenever I click on Our Therapy it brings up the Bus instead.
A good start, I will definitely wait for more. I enjoy the story so far and am interested in where things are going. The events have a good amount of variety and the UI is easy to use. I liked the various characters, they seemed to have their own specific personalities, motivations, and secrets(?). I certainly had questions about what was going on, but hopefully you will expand the story in a satisfy way. The effectiveness of your translation fluctuates, though that is understandable at this stage. I usually understood what you meant, but there were times when I gave up and had to move on without figuring out exactly what you intended.
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can't leave the house because my dress isn't a dress 10/10 can't even play it
please tell me how to get money in the game, I can't progress
Im still trying to figure out how ot get out of the house on day 9
I used random online save editor. Your saves are in C:\Users\myusername\AppData\Roaming\RenPy\Ourselves
how to save game in this game, right click don't work ?
I haven't played it yet, but I want to tell you to completely ignore anyone having issues with English being a second language. They wouldn't be able to play at all if you wrote it in your first language. I wouldn't be able to play it at all either.
I appreciate all the extra work it must take to create something like this, and that you are doing us a giant favor by including us in it AT ALL!!!
Thanks, and keep up the good work!
is this still geting updates?
Is english not your first language or something? I am just noticing a lots of grammer issues and I'm not trying to be rude or mean, This looks like a great game but the writing could maybe be improved on I have trouble following what is going on sometimes because of the awkward dialog. I really do like the game though
Android soon?
Please add a zero energy Search option in the city for things like bus fares.
You need to disassociate story routes from relationships. If you're going to have a lot of love interests, you'll be creating a rabbit hole of dev time for yourself trying to create an entire route for each one. This is one of the cases where going sandbox will actually speed up development.
Example: Have Alex meet the male neighbor Day 1, help with boxes, then go home to find sister bought the girly outfits, then Day 2 he meets the female neighbor in the car, if the MC takes the bus he meets her on the street anyway, and the MC is invited to the party later on. Similarly, the Alley event happens whenever you manually choose the Alley.
What happens is that different dialogue and events changes when characters are first met. For instance, if the MC takes the bus he won't know the neighbors are siblings until the party.
But you end up saving dev time in the long run by using the party to establish the full cast.
it wont let me work on day 10 at the cafe because i need to wear the cloths but when i go home to change it, it wont let me leave because im force to wear the dress to leave?
Having the same issue. Kinda an important bit for the dev to respond to. That event is at least skippable but once you get to day 12 you cant change your clothes to go do the interview again
needs a back button
How do remove the buttplug it wont let me leave yhe house
Hey, will the MC get a vagina or is just sissy?
The discord link doesn't work
If I were to buy the game here, would it still be Public version or would it be patreon?
I am not sure about this, but I'm not selling the game. At least, that's what my real intention is. It's completely free to play. Anyone can play this game. You do not have to pay and head to my Patreon page, really. I'm more than happy if you have played the game, despite every bad thing or joke in it. Thehe! Sorry, I just got carried away. To answer your question, they both are different.
how to remove the anal plug? I was masturbating in the room and the system offered to insert it, but I don't understand how to take it out again. At the same time, he refuses to leave the house with her
Are you on Keena's path? Have you got the lubricant yet? You can find it in the guest room.
no. But I restarted again and went through a new one. When you buy an anal plug in a store, there is an option to put it on during masturbation, but then you can't take it out...
Which path are you taking on? I have to check that one.
hi, i’m a bit confused about the chastity Cage, is it implemented? If yes how do i unlock it?
No, you can't unlock the cage for this version. The story has not gone there yet.
hi, I'm playing the public version of this game and I'm confused about some things.
I am aware that the game is still in an early stage of development. Despite reading the walkthrough, readme and changelog, I still haven't been able to find out how I can develop the necessary skills to work in the boutique, make-up shop or studio.
I also have no idea where I can get the necessary transition skills to enter the tattoo studio or have operations performed in the hospital.I am also not able to purchase sex toys, although unlocked by the event in the MC's living room.
Would be very grateful for some help..
I'm sorry, I have not made a complete game walkthrough. It might be difficult for a new player, but I think if you're following the main quest will finish the game without problems.
So here's how to unlock skills:
(NOTE: Those Sub and Dom Skills aren't available for the public version.)
After you have clicked corruption button, it will bring you to this screen.
The playable skills for this current version are Transitions, Scheming, and Thievery. So you do not have to unlock the others.
You will be able to purchase the toys the next day after the event in the MC's living room.
Thanks for the fast reply.
OMG I would never have interpreted that as a clickable button. To me, it just looked like normal text.
It would make sense if you also visually highlighted these buttons as such.
In other games, the cursor will also change from an arrow to a hand when hovering over something clickable.
In any case, an explanation of how the skill system works belongs as a tutorial in the main menu of the game.
No problem :) The previous version actually looks like what you mentioned. The button is visually highlighted and hovered. I'm still experimenting with everything inside the game, by the way.
Hi, I've tried all the routes, but I can't find the option to advertise sex toys on any of them. Only condoms, lubricant and the Sissy DVD (after activation) are available for purchase.
It is beyond me how the sums of money of over 88000 that can be seen in the screenshots on this page here can be achieved.In addition, the game does not reveal to me how the skills communication, teamwork, administrative, problem solving, nursing and healthcare should be leveled.
In my opinion, the game is not self-explanatory enough in its current form.
How many days (in terms of story) is the finished game actually designed for?
So far I have never managed to get 14 corruprion points for masterplan.
---Does this project actually have an associated discord server?
Nothing is listed on Patreon and the link provided here goes nowhere.
The playable toys for the current version are a dildo, buttplug, lubricant, and Sissy's DVD.
I haven't added the ability to gain these skills yet: communication, teamwork, administrative, problem solving, nursing, and healthcare.
As I have mentioned, I'm still experimenting with everything inside the game. This game still needs a lot of improvement. I have updated the game twice so far. I'm not working on this project full-time, there are still lots of things to add and work to be done.
I used the screenshot from playing version B.
It depends on the chosen path, 14/15 days in the game.
Yes, my project has a discord server. I can invite you to my channel. You can add me: testingmood#3494.
I love your game, I hope I can support you on Patreon as soon as I get a job hahaha, I think you could publish your game for android too, so more people would try it, i think Ren'py has a way to export it in apk.
If you ever wanted to translate the game into Spanish, I could also help you.
btw the Discord link seems to be broken.
I hope you continue with this project.
Cheers!
Thanks for the feedback. Yes, Renpy can do that, but I'm not confident enough to make the phone version. This game still needs a lot of improvement. I appreciate your help, but I don't think translating into other languages is a good idea since I have to change and fix the grammar over time. So, yeah, don't waste your time translating this game. Theheh. Here's my discord: testingmood#3494.
I wish that U game maker did add it so that U/we can play this game on the phone. On Android.
What is the point of making a game if you can't even save?? The game says error error every fucking time! FIX THIS DAMN GAME MAKER!!👿👿👿👿
Whoa. Calm down, mate. But I haven't found that save issues, really. Just send me the error log.
[code]
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "renpy/common/00action_file.rpy", line 382, in __call__
renpy.save(fn, extra_info=save_name)
Exception: Not saved - no valid save locations.
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_load_save.rpym", line 35, in script
$ ui.interact()
File "renpy/ast.py", line 923, in execute
renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
File "renpy/python.py", line 2235, in py_exec_bytecode
exec(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_load_save.rpym", line 35, in <module>
$ ui.interact()
File "renpy/ui.py", line 298, in interact
rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3276, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 4110, in interact_core
rv = root_widget.event(ev, x, y, 0)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1090, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/transition.py", line 48, in event
return self.new_widget.event(ev, x, y, st) # E1101
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1090, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1090, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 720, in event
rv = self.child.event(ev, x, y, st)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1090, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1297, in event
rv = super(Window, self).event(ev, x, y, st)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 273, in event
rv = d.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, st)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1090, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1297, in event
rv = super(Window, self).event(ev, x, y, st)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 273, in event
rv = d.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, st)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1090, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 273, in event
rv = d.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, st)
File "renpy/display/behavior.py", line 979, in event
return handle_click(self.clicked)
File "renpy/display/behavior.py", line 914, in handle_click
rv = run(action)
File "renpy/display/behavior.py", line 329, in run
return action(*args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/common/00action_file.rpy", line 382, in __call__
renpy.save(fn, extra_info=save_name)
File "renpy/loadsave.py", line 435, in save
location.save(slotname, sr)
File "renpy/savelocation.py", line 424, in save
raise Exception("Not saved - no valid save locations.")
Exception: Not saved - no valid save locations.
Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.8.1895
Ourselves 1.1.2.a
Fri Nov 25 00:34:47 2022
[/code]
is this it????
I think it's to do with permission. If you're using a guest account which would prevent Renpy from saving there or something that doesn't have "write permission" to wherever the save directory is located.
On Windows, your Ren'py save files can be found in the following folder:
%APPDATA%/RenPy/game_directory
Please, check the permissions for the Renpy folder and the folder above it to make sure there is both read and write access for it. And make sure your antivirus isn't blocking Renpy from reading and writing. Have you tried changing the windows user or running the game.exe as admin?
Another game that does not work when I try to save. SO ANOYING
Oh, that's odd. How so? I have tested it on 3 different pc, and it all worked.
Maybe is it my pc that is a racist bitch.
Believe I have discovered a bug it won’t let me go back home after changing my work outfit. Just keeps telling me to go to the mall and I just run through the scene with worker over and over.
Hi, thanks for mentioning the bug. I was unintentionally replacing a single block of code when I fixed the dialogue. You can re-download the file if you want, just load your progress at the start of day 4. It should've run without problems now. I've just fixed it.
Unfortunately after trying it still didn’t work, sorry.
This one works, thank you
Hi, sorry but the Mac version still won’t open. Same issue as before.
Hi, sorry just checked notif. Have you tried this? If the case is a corrupted file, then I'll re-upload the file.
Followed the steps on the link you provided however even after repairing it still provided the same issue. Sorry
will there be a Mac version for the update?
I've just released the update for the Mac version.
Strange not sure what’s gong on but when I try opening it. It just tells it can’t error 2. Whatever that means
Could you send the error screenshot? discord: testingmood#3494.
Is there any place for me to know what's new in the game?
Yes, please check the readme inside the game folder.
I'm excited for the next updates of the game really really good
Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate it. I've just released the update :)
How do I buy work clothes?
You have to go to the female clothing store (beautique) at the mall.
so I'm stuck on day 4. I looked over the Readme and did everything. When I try to go to sleep it says I still have things to do
I do this. Library- no energy left- rest till full repeat.
Yes, I'm sorry for not mentioning the bugs. I have fixed that in the new version.
How do I buy work clothes?
I love the game so far, but how do you get a job when nobody will hire you?
Never mind that you find one then you have no money to take the Bus home WTF is the deal with this game.
I'm having the same problem
Damn bruh I just played it and it has great potential and also android version would be Appreciated btw great game
Use joiplay
Yea thank u that's cool but I've already played this on PC I'm waiting for next update
Thank you :) I will let you know If I've made the android version. But for now, I want to focus on the PC's build.
is this game still updated? or the dev stopped working on it?
This game is still developing. :)
it may seems that im stuck on day 2, I followed the walkthrough and idk what i missed. deffinetly get that work dress and *you know what* but idk what else, help anyone?
sure it's day 3, with the bra and the dress you can take the bus
Could you tell me more? Did you get stuck where the MC couldn't go to sleep? If you got that stuck, the MC has to go to the city only once per day until the day of 5. On day 6, the MC can visit the City freely. That is Melathrion City's rule :(
On day 2 I can't get a job, my English is bad and I didn't understand any indication
So, on day 2... The MC goes to the office then goes to the museum/library. I'd recommend you see the readme inside the game folder. There is a walkthrough there.
Day 1 ,take the bus to the city and ignore the trouble
Thanks for mentioning that, Moldy ;)
Mm. After doing the first shopping stuff, the game is telling me I need to go to the therapist, but whenever I click on Our Therapy it brings up the Bus instead.
Thanks for mentioning that. I'll fix it in the next version :)
A good start, I will definitely wait for more. I enjoy the story so far and am interested in where things are going. The events have a good amount of variety and the UI is easy to use. I liked the various characters, they seemed to have their own specific personalities, motivations, and secrets(?). I certainly had questions about what was going on, but hopefully you will expand the story in a satisfy way. The effectiveness of your translation fluctuates, though that is understandable at this stage. I usually understood what you meant, but there were times when I gave up and had to move on without figuring out exactly what you intended.
Thanks for playing. Yes, indeed, they have their own secrets and purposes. Ah, yes, the language is my main problem here. :(
Luckily, I got some helped and did some fixes on the grammar in the next version. I hope I can release the update this weekend. The-heh.
The Discord link seems to be broken…?
Is there any chance of getting this game on andoird? I'd pay for it 🙂
Honestly, I've never thought about it. Maybe, in the future? The-heh.